The Race for the Grand Line (Open; Challenge towards Yuki.)

Roja D. Yuki:

Cons:

-Multiple weeks of inactivity
-Basic Grammar errors and SMS-language (ya used instead of yeah, etc)
-Lack of sense in multiple sentences
-Poor choices even in the small gap of activity showcased.
-General lack of content quality and enough merits to be given a very high grade.

Pros:

-Sticking to the character in the indomitable trait of personality
-Trying to put up a fight even when all was lost and smiling in the face of danger as a true D.

Final Grade: 5 (you may ask for a mundane item or something similar, explaining how you got them while in prison in your next Asking post.)

EXP Earned: 1000 EXP (Half of the common 2000 EXP since you have less than 7 posts)

Current Level: 22

Nym:

Cons:

-Small typing mistakes (tot he instead of to the, but very rare and caused by rapid typing, probably unintentional)
-Heavy lack of commas at times.
-General lack of description in NPCs, scenery, etc. at times.
-General lack of content quality and enough merits to be given a very high grade.

Pros:

-Excellent grade of activity
-Sticking to the character in her fears, personality and backstory
-Being so overwhelmingly honest in most of her argument, she got away from trouble by simply taking refuge in audacity, a well used trope.
-Getting away from a Cipher Police 4 Officer using wits and not brawn as one would expect.
-Manipulating non-critical NPCs and the surroundings coherently.

Final Grade: 8 (You may ask for things such as special items, berri, a certain technique, etc, so long as you explain in the following Asking post and it is coherent enough. You can have a look at the "Roleplay Rules: Fics and their rewards" thread for tips on what you could ask with your current grade.)

EXP Earned: 1600 (Half of the usual 3200 due to having less than 7 posts)

Current Level: 18

After this post, the two of you may ask for their reward and give proper justification of the means used to achieve them (getting some berri by saying "I robbed some rich people blind after I went into the town" or getting a book by saying "I behaved nicely inside Ernest´s body" count as ways to justify, but you can´t get a technique by saying "Oh, I winged this one up while walking to the city". Please be coherent, even if loosely so.)

Ernest Schwartz:

Cons:

-General lack of content quality and enough merits to be given a very high grade.
-Slight inactivity issues.
-Lack of evidence allowing a pirate to slip past him.
-Winning a battle by default.

Pros:

-Near-flawless grammar and coherence.
-Defeating a Mythical Zoan Devil Fruit user, despite it being via disqualification.
-Capturing a high-bounty pirate, at least for the Blues´ standards.
-Using non-lethal methods consistently and holding back entirely in what could have been a serious fight.
-Fulfilling Cipher Police duties professionally.
-Sticking to the character in personality, true affiliation and loyalty (to Revolutionaries), and intentions.
-Not following orders just to keep another character alive, despite having the means to cause player death.

Final Grade: 8.5

EXP Earned: 3400

Current Level: 33

If you have any issues about any of our grades, please PM me or contact me otherwise as to acknowledge and reply to said issues. Yuki may ask for a second grading from our dear Administrator, Kuddlez, but his grade will be final, even if it is even lower than the original. If the two of them are too different, they will be added together and divided by two. The result will be the final note, without further room for discussion. Also, do note that the Pros and Cons sections are merely there to guide you on some of the things I based myself on to give these grades. Most of them are given following little more than personal opinion regarding these Pros and Cons, and other factors as well.